Denied Giggly99legs police application.

[giggly999legs]

- In-game name: Giggly999legs.
- Age:15.
- Date joined server: a year ago
- Current playtime: 6d 7h 17m 17s
- Why do you want to be a Police Officer: I what to be a police officer because i what to help people
- What can you bring to the Department: If I were to get this position- I would bring a fierce- ambitious attitude. In the past my ambition has led me to take on roles of leadership when necessary. In this position I would confidently work with the team and willingly take leadership roles when necessary.
- Additional Information: I know being a police officer is a stressful and tiring job but i think i have the skills to do it. And i am very very sorry about my record and punishments.

 

[xEndeavour]

Good Luck!

 

[giggly999legs]

Thanks!

 

[bharatj]

Couple things

How have you joined a year ago but have “worked in [your] current role for a couple of years now.”

You mention leadership in the past, please elaborate on what leadership roles you have taken.

Why does the style of your wording and vocabulary sound very different throughout your application?

How would your fierce and ambitious attitude assist the DoJ?

Are you sorry about your record and punishments, or have you grown since then?

 

[giggly999legs]

My leadership used to be blockdmoob.co and brewing manager at blocks.co.

 

[giggly999legs]

My leadership used to be blockdmoob.co and brewing manager at blocks.co.

Ill do the rest of the questions latter.

 

[giggly999legs]

My style wording and vocabulary sounds different because i was tired.

 

[giggly999legs]

And i wold be fierce to the criminals and ambitious to get all of the criminals off the street.

 

[giggly999legs]

Last question: I am sorry and i have grown.

 

[giggly999legs]

I will try as hard as i can to make my warning on the 10th be the last.

 

[xEndeavour]

Did you write this application? There is a stark contrast in your modality, spelling, and grammar.

 

[giggly999legs]

i was tired.

 

[Dusty_3]

It does seem a little off with the font and huge change of vocabulary but good luck anyway!

 

[giggly999legs]

Thank you!

 

[bharatj]

(Thank you to xEndeavour for finding this)

This may be why your grammar changes suddenly...

https://www.how2become.com/blog/why-do-you-want-to-become-a-police-officer/

It almost seems like u copied and pasted directly from this website.. care to explain?

 

[giggly999legs]

I will re-right it.

 

[giggly999legs]

Im verry verry sorry.

 

[bharatj]

Denied

Sorry, your application for Police Officer has been denied. You're welcome to reapply for this position in 30 days.

Feedback

Copied and pasted words from a website into the application, just came back from a break, and gave no details in the application or in their responses

 

[giggly999legs]

Oke.